Using the Essay Exercise Template to Write about "Dead End"

Dead End: Maria’s Journey
- Forces in Conflict –

Essay Exercise: Download the Essay Exercise template under "Handouts" on the right side of this blog. Use the template form to complete this assignment.

Here is what we are asking you to do:

This template establishes the structure of a standard essay. It will help you to organize your ideas.

Your Task: Discuss Maria’s struggle between the “dead end” life and her promise to her mother. In the story, Maria has to deal with negative external and internal forces. She is also influenced by positive external and internal forces. Give examples of the forces that affect her, and explain why she makes her final choice.

Step 1: Explain your understanding of why the story is called “Dead End.”

Step 2: Read the Thesis Statement provided.

Step 3: Re-read and choose specific examples from the story. Give specific examples of some of the external and internal forces she faces, describing her challenges IN YOUR OWN WORDS.

Step 4: Restate the thesis, and refer to key evidence from the text that backs up your opinion.
Introduction: Explain your understanding of why the story is called “Dead End.” What does the term “Dead End” refer to in the story? What does Maria think is the dead-end life? Explain.

Thesis Statement:
In “Dead End,” by Rudolfo Anaya, Maria faces a struggle between the negative influences of her surroundings, her feelings, and her family. She experiences internal and external conflicts before she chooses her future path in life.

Body Paragraphs:
What negative external forces, such as other people’s opinions, society’s expectations, peer pressures, family obligations, and family problems, have an effect on Maria?

a) What negative external forces, such as other people’s opinions, society’s expectations, peer pressures, family obligations, and family problems, have an effect on Maria?
b) What negative internal forces, such as her thoughts, feelings, and desires influence Maria?
c) What positive external forces, such as other people’s opinions, society’s expectations, peer pressures, family obligations, and family problems, have an effect on Maria?
d) What positive internal forces, such as her thoughts, feelings, and desires influence Maria?